|Reviews for Kingdom of Dentmore|
| TaltushMeiMei chapter 1 . 4/22/2009
A few small points. First of all, it should be "The inns are full", not "Inn's". Second, the ending is fairly choppy, as though there's another chapter lurking around somewhere. As a standalone story, it doesn't hold with an ending like that. Other than that, I like it. It has the feel of a classic fairy tale without feeling used. Nicely done.