Reviews for immortality
noctema chapter 2 . 4/24/2009
this is beautiful.

perfect.
all you need is oxygen chapter 2 . 4/22/2009
i've fucking missed your writing.

your poetry is, as always, way above the standard.

the last trochee is beastly.
silly silly girl chapter 2 . 4/22/2009
Stop being such a good writer.

Just kidding.

I thought you died, but you're obviously alive, kicking, and screaming.

This is very good.
lymli chapter 2 . 4/22/2009
well, very powerful.