Reviews for Candy Bar
Unknown Error 4.0 chapter 1 . 4/22/2009
Amazing. I thought it was going to be funny, but it wasn't, which is the way I enjoy it.

It's true, though, isn't it? An argument, a quarrel, a spat, and our appetite is gone, as is our ability to enjoy things. Because all we think about is the words she used, the harsh tone, the look.

I like the last two lines. Definitely said in the heat of anger. The emotions in this were spectacular.

Con