|Reviews for Trinity Inc|
| paperbullet chapter 1 . 4/22/2009
That was not bad, not bad at all. It's rare that a writer is willing to instill bad qualities in their protagonists (since they're usually using them as a stand-in for themselves, just under a different/cooler name), but you didn't fall for that, and it worked.
Occasional spelling errors. More frequent grammar errors. Spell-check won't catch everything.
If this is going to be a long-term series, you should apply for a beta-editor.
I have added this to my favorites.