Reviews for Trinity Inc
paperbullet chapter 1 . 4/22/2009
Yay!

That was not bad, not bad at all. It's rare that a writer is willing to instill bad qualities in their protagonists (since they're usually using them as a stand-in for themselves, just under a different/cooler name), but you didn't fall for that, and it worked.

Occasional spelling errors. More frequent grammar errors. Spell-check won't catch everything.

If this is going to be a long-term series, you should apply for a beta-editor.

I have added this to my favorites.