Uhm.. Look, just want to say I was kidn of harsh and childish.

Sorry.

Readers of this story, I bet its great, and I'm sorry if I offended anyone who liked this story.. :l

I'll take my reviews back (Mods are rlly slow though, so sorry for the flames.)

Sorry, again.

Uhm? I took your plot?

Excuse me, but where do you see prostitutes in my story? You said a bet in your review. I don't have a bet in my story... I have a scheme against revenge.

Please, enlighten me on how I've stolen your plot. Uhm, can we get real here? Popular guy meets abused girl is PRETTY common. Cliche? Sound familiar?

Yeah... I didn't take your plot. I've created my own. In addition, you said I've stolen all your idea right? So I'm assuming you read my story.

I don't think you read it correctly.

a) The bet thing. THERE WAS NO BET IN MY STORY.

b) I posted 10 chapters. Please tell me how in 10 chapters I stole your every idea.

c) Did I say you're not an amazing writer? No, I personally don't. I don't think you're an amazing writers. Oh, try not throwing statistic around unless your sure of them, okay? one out of twelve... okay there...

I also don't find plagiarism flattering. Your suspscious? Listen idiot, One, I've already told you that teh ines you claim to me 'plagiarized' are clearly NOT. they are not identical, they are similar. Sorry for have a similar senetence to your story... Yeah, I'm definitely a hardcore plagiarist.

Don't really care how many times you've been plagiarized.

I also don't care if your readers attack me idiot. You need your reviewers to attack me? Already you signify how truly pathetic you are. How did you get so insecure? And paranoid?

Let em clarify this, in case you've not understood. I have no plans in stealing your plot okay? Prostitutes belong to you. Not me. I'm steering clear of that area... But, I wils say that the whole cliche thing is totally unfair. You can't just blame me for plagiarism. Its common knowledge. Its a cliche.

My story is a big cliche, and the abusive past was put in there to make it less predictable. I apologize if you find it, "plagiarism" but I'm not going to change my entire plot because you feel, "suspiscious" Sorry.

Have a good day too.

Okay, Don't know why Fictionpress is being incredibly shitty. My review was so not that short...

I've already left you a strongly worded reply on your reviews, so w/e, I guess.

Just want to make a point; Not everyone is out to get you. Not everyone thinks your work is so amazing that its worth wasting time on it and and getting (eventually) caught and flamed by your 'followers'.

& Guess what?

I'm one of them.

Hey, remember me? Oh, yeah I'm the girl you're accusing of plagiarizing your story...

Hey, readers for this story, come look at my work. Tell me how much I've ripped off this 'author'. Please, I'm dying to hear how much I plagiarized from her.

Apparently, No one is allowed to use abused girls and popular guys because its your idea, right? Like, do you really get how stupid you sound? I stole your work? Mind me saying, I don't like your writing. I bet you don't like mine.

Yeah, Why the hell would I want to steal your sh*t? Stop flattering yourself okay? I don't like how you write... so screw off. I'm not interested in your work. I'm fully capable writing my own..

OH! ~*~

quite the caste system you have here ... ;)

OH MY GOD! I CAN'T BELIEVE HE JUST LET HER LEAVE LIKE THAT! DUDE, THAT MADE ME CRY! THIS IS SUCH A FANTASTIC STORY! I'LL GET TO WORK READING THE SEQUAL AS SOON AS I CAN. ONCE AGAIN, THIS WAS AMAZING! DANG, I WANTED THEM TO END UP TOGETHER! BUT OH WELL, IT WAS STILL GREAT.

Wow... He died? That's sad. At least some people got happy endings. NEXT!

Wow, this is sad. I'm crying. Everything bad is happening.

Wow, this is sad. I like the last paragraph. It's sad, and sums up the whole chapter. I have no idea who the half is. Unless it's the baby, but I doubt that's it. Man, I hope it's Riley's.

oh my God. So many things are happening! This is such an amazing story! I can't wait to read this rest of it!

OMG! SHE TOLD HIM! NEXT! I have to see how he's going to react.

Aw, poor Alyssa. Aw, Riley is sweet. Happy ending please!

OMG! I thought for sure that he was going to ask if she was pregnant! Is he going to find out? Aw, his mom's a bitch. Poor kid. Sad last line.

Okay, I think she's A: Pregnant and has been denying it. Or B: Pregnant and she lost the baby. I don't know. Or maybe I'm way off. When she was in the hospital answering the question, I kind of thought she thought she was pregnant. But I wasn't sure. NEXT!

Aw, this chapter was actually sweet. :D