Reviews for These Lives I Walk
brittani chapter 14 . 3/6/2011
hurry up and write more!
blithe.serendipity chapter 14 . 3/5/2011
It was interesting to a degree and then the thing just seemed too coincidental and the now its just blah

Sienna and Rose are twins right? Idk.

Eh I really liked it at the beginning but yeah... I hope it becomes more realistic.

Thanks for writing
angelzz chapter 13 . 3/2/2011
great story! OMG! is rose riley's sister? or sienna's? whoever she is u have an amazing talent!
Midnight113 chapter 14 . 2/28/2011
Awesome, I loved the ending. Poor Rose, lol. Really great job, this story is so well written. I'm glad you're safe and doing well, keep up the good work!
Sorraya T chapter 14 . 2/27/2011
Hahahahahahahahaa that was a hilarious end to the chapter, and it was great work :)

I hope you update soon, but don't feel too pressured. I hope everything is okay in Christchurch and everyone you know is okay. Unless they're mean. Then they can have a brick fall on their foot and they will deserve it.

:)

Hope you're alright dear!
SkaterGirl03 chapter 14 . 2/27/2011
This is great... your style is easy to read and fun, and I like the way that you have developed your characters. Can't wait for more!
Midnight113 chapter 13 . 2/27/2011
Loved it, I like how you switch over to different POV's throughout the story. It's interesting getting to see what's going through everyone's head. Well done, I can't wait for more and I hope you and your family are safe right now.
Midnight113 chapter 12 . 2/15/2011
That was excellent, I loved the ending with the tension between them. Well done, update soon!
Sorraya T chapter 12 . 2/15/2011
BEAUTIFUL chapter. You are an amazing writer and im so excited for more of this! Riley is so dumb though :/ hahahaha. but i still love him
Jada Writes chapter 4 . 2/14/2011
Not bad, but I think you were much too "inspired" by Pretty Woman.
Midnight113 chapter 11 . 2/7/2011
Awesome story, I'm really enjoying the plot. Keep up the good work!
deactivated20172203 chapter 11 . 2/6/2011
Wow, awesome story, though I feel sorry for Sienna - ruptured spleen, eurgh! D:

I can't wait for the next chapter, this story is so mega amazing :)

- Hearts x
passiononfire chapter 11 . 2/5/2011
wow, it is really different in rose's view. and i wonder what bet jake and the other guy was talking about
Sorraya T chapter 11 . 2/5/2011
Awesome chapter, as always. I'm liking Rose's personality, it's very black and white.

UGH YOU WILL NEVER BELIEVE WHAT HAPPENED TO ME. Last night I went out with my friends, got about 20 mins of sleep, had my phone chucked in a pool and my ipod touch and money stolen, and now i have to do like 3 hours of homework and i have a hangover. today is gonna be fun :(

but back to the story, it was awesome :)
keary ance chapter 10 . 1/1/2011
I love your story. I will be rooting for this. :)

Hoping to see more Sienna and Riley. That would be great.
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