|Reviews for Envy|
| FaithMemory chapter 1 . 6/1/2009
Very true. I truly believe that 'envy' can destroy good things, really? I've experienced this, and I ended up losing a lot of things. :( LOL. nice piece, I can really relate to this :)
| crazyman12 chapter 1 . 5/7/2009
ah, this poem speaks the truth. Envy DOES ruin many things. You stated this in a straightforward way, and managed to convey your thoughts seamlessly. I'm a bit confused about the last two lines, though. I wasn't quite sure what you meant by "It must be will / make us fall." did you mean to add a 'that' on the last line? Anyhoo, great job.