wow, I thought i wasn't going to like this, but it has turned out to be really interesting.

I keep forgetting to try to figure out the fairy tale, and except for the one about Mother Hulda and the sisters and the well (diamonds and toads), I haven't. So now they've gone to the underworld and played around with dwarves or trolls or elves or something. Nope, I don't get it. But it has the proper feel of fairy tale, so I don't care.

I don't care if everybody else hates Ash. I like her. She's not bad, and she does care about Caleb when she can bring her magpie mind to bear on it. She's just, as Caleb keep pointing out, very immature. But she's also seventeen and has time to grow up.

What Fairytale is this? Is Ky evil? What fairy tale is this?

"their cock brushed each other. Caleb stood" Er... cock should be plural... And it appears I've gotten better with stuff like this. :)

"Ash woke up under their parent relentless attention" parent should be plural possessive?

"that Caleb when to the convention with" when should be went? o_o

Way to go Ky, ruining the moment there. ;

This left me which much curiosity. Is Ky going to be the permanent love interest or are there going to be other contenders? Will Caleb ever grow a backbone? Not that it's necessarily a bad thing but it's going to give him trouble in the long run. And is Ash ever going to stop being impetuous? I shall ponder this and wait with anticipation for the next chapter.

1. I have no idea.

2. A high ho. :)

This story is quite enjoyable. I wish I'd found it before, but that might have made waiting for updates seem even more unbearable.

Gogo Caleb

I've read this fairytale before! I don't know if Shannon Hale made it up or wrote a parody of it, but I read her version of it, but I forgot the title. Cool.

YAY M-RATED. Also, I'm horrible at fairytales, so I have no idea. D: *fail*

Ash laughed. “You did. He would have given anything to be me.”

I never was good at pop quizzes. Heck, I don't even want to figure out. It would ruin the surprise. XD

Argh, I can't think of anything to say. D: Sorry.

Whats next, whats next?

Zucchini flower ice cream, haha. Poor Caleb. YOU SHOULD NEVER SAY NO TO GIRL SCOUT-COOKIES, ASH. And, I dunno if it's just me, but I'd read the fairy tale I was in before doing something drastic. Sigh.

Awesome chapter, though. More Ky in the next?

Hahaha. I guess this is one situation where my excessive knowledge about various fairytales would come in handy. Tell Caleb to go to Project Gutenberg. XD

I love how you brought together the fairytales and the internet. Hmm... an internet version of Alice in Wonderland... intriguing... You can go so many ways with this, I'm excited to see what happens next.

Oh yeah, the version I read of "Diamonds and Toads" was by Gail Carson Levine. I liked the entire anthology she wrote.

I already don't like Ash...She seems to be some sort of a kinda greedy biatch who's way obsessed with having the good life. But I like Caleb a lot, I like that jewels fall out of his mouth. It's actually kind of hot. xD

Jewels fell from his mouth...Somehow I can't see that happening...And the old granny gives me a prickling feeling on the back of my neck-she's really creepy.

I can't wait to read what happens next! Update!

I'm reviewing chapters backwards. This is the review for Chapter 2;

diamonds and pearls coming out of Caleb's mouth. Oh my. I do hope poor Ashley doesn't have to suffer too much in her goose girl stage or whatever it's going to be.