Reviews for Monstrous Heart
blAck.eMOhawk chapter 1 . 8/9/2009
lol, I was listening music by schubert (dunno what's the name and is lazy to look up on it) while reading this poem and the feeling of the poem reach my heart, bleh, disgusting words lol I'm not used to using this kind of words "the feeling reach my heart" lol. Nice choices of words, I specially like the 3rd stanza, that consumes the inner me. However it would be better if you put something gore in it. lol, nvm.. I'm crazy sometimes. still, nice poem. I'm fav-ing it. :D
ISherly chapter 1 . 5/4/2009
very good poem ;)

you use words very well

the words really fit into the poem!

good poem, as always P
Chris the Mooshoo chapter 1 . 4/26/2009
Lol, I was reading this one while reviewing for Inner Self. o-o" Sowwy bout that. But still, I like both poems~ Aww, I stole what I was going to say in the other review. _ But still, great poem!