Reviews for Drought
Chasing Skylines chapter 1 . 4/25/2009
[The dents in the dull mustard pencil in pale lead erase]

With all the adjective stacking, it was sort of awkward; particularly, the "in pale lead erase" part. What?

[Grabbing into reality and slowing down with the wind]

I think you meant "grabbing onto reality."

[To the hum of the lone mosquito hovering close to the ground,]

I liked this line, I could picture and hear it.

Poignant final words.

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