Reviews for Say you love me say you not
fleur de l'est chapter 1 . 5/2/2009
Great choice of vocabulary, "seal" "mourn the red sky". Very abstract, I agree with Marcel Proust - you seem to have been forced into your finest lines by the tyranny of rhyme ) The words don't seem to go together but the image makes perfect sense. Your poems are not just good in themselves but also inpiring


P.S. I *love* your poems, I think you should publicise them more. Maybe you should submit more reviews to more people, some people (like myself) always return reviews so they'll have a look at your poems too )