|Reviews for Heartache|
| wo bu ai ni le chapter 1 . 1/1/2010
Ooh. Radical imagery, yet a great metaphor. Your head blows me up.
| For My Future chapter 1 . 4/24/2009
dude this is sick! if it were me id make it longer and add more like imagery and emotion. that would make this poem like seriously heart wrenching! keep up the great work!