Reviews for Roses
wo bu ai ni le chapter 1 . 1/1/2010
Rose thorns :) Another great image. 'expect your hand to bleed' - I like the sense of inevitablity here. And the second stanza ( Aww. It makes me want to cry (almost). It's so true :(
LoonyLuna chapter 1 . 7/17/2009
Omg..loved it :D Very nice imagery again..the one word ending was great..very dramatic. Well done.
LostInMe chapter 1 . 5/26/2009
Nice one...original and effective simile. I do agree with Let It Rain about the last word. But it's your poem - do what you wish with it! Either way I like it!
Let It Rain chapter 1 . 4/29/2009
I like this, but the last word (shattered) doesn't seem to fit. It dissonates in relation to the rest of the poem.

Otherwise, really good poem.
FaithMemory chapter 1 . 4/27/2009
I really like this one.. I think, very realistic in some other way :) Nice comparison too. Like it!
For My Future chapter 1 . 4/24/2009
short but straight to the point and awesome man! great concept dude great job!