|Reviews for You can read me?|
| fleur de l'est chapter 1 . 1/1/2010
Good comparisons between the superficial and the spiritual; and well done for doing three in a row, I could never be so consistent for so long!
I also liked the way you ended in a question - rhetorical though it may be, after all that we've been told.
| dragonflydreamer chapter 1 . 7/28/2009
Nice topic. I can totally relate.
I like the format you use throughout this. It gives it a nice pulse, and really drives your point in with the repitition.
I really love the third stanza. Great images and emotions.
I don't like how the first stanza is centered, though. I don't really see the need for it.