Reviews for Strangle
Forever or Never chapter 21 . 6/9/2009
Random ending, i can't really fit it with any of the rest of the collection but it seems to go nicely anyway. Welldone I will read another one of your collections.
Forever or Never chapter 20 . 6/9/2009
cute, very cute in such a dark collection it somehow goes well.
Forever or Never chapter 19 . 6/9/2009
this one is quite long but that's probably why i love it! rofl
Forever or Never chapter 18 . 6/9/2009
this is sad, but I love the question mark in the title, but you seemed to miss the question mark after the first line
Forever or Never chapter 17 . 6/9/2009
i dunno if i mentioned your creepy
Forever or Never chapter 16 . 6/9/2009
i don't understand why i am so hooked to your poetry but maybe one reason is your variety that somehow always feels familer, it is quirky to discribe maybe its just cause' of your weird names
Forever or Never chapter 15 . 6/9/2009
a long distance relationship you have had or something?
Forever or Never chapter 14 . 6/9/2009
this is good
Forever or Never chapter 13 . 6/9/2009
this is just creepy that must be why i love your stuff!
Forever or Never chapter 12 . 6/9/2009
YES YES YEPITY YEP! this has to be a bunch of poems based around a story, it just all fits together so good.
Forever or Never chapter 11 . 6/9/2009
maybe this could be another theme, maybe the person could have finaly tried to kill himself.
Forever or Never chapter 10 . 6/9/2009
Maybe you could turn this one could be in a collection as well that is based around this poem, so please take some of these hints into what i would like to read, because i think that it could be very big, plus you could get some fun stories put together with poems out of these. Just think about it. (please)
Forever or Never chapter 9 . 6/9/2009
YES I think that I sense another theme, maybe about trying to turn back time to change your life, and maybe not being able to fit in, even though everybody is different the main character finds him/herself even more different and then that person has flown over the edge and thinks about his experiences. Well, thats just what I have kind of picked up from the intro, man in grey, strangle, the unicorn one? and this one but thats just a wild guess i will have to keep reading.
Forever or Never chapter 8 . 6/9/2009
another very intense poem lollol
Forever or Never chapter 7 . 6/9/2009
um... yeah. This one seems like it might be a bigger story, I would love to see it expanded and not so confined into the one poem, maybe you could do another collection like Forbidden but longer and about this I would love to hear the story behind it. This one could maybe be a premise, i would like to see that.
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