Reviews for Strangle |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Random ending, i can't really fit it with any of the rest of the collection but it seems to go nicely anyway. Welldone I will read another one of your collections. |
![]() ![]() ![]() cute, very cute in such a dark collection it somehow goes well. |
![]() ![]() ![]() this one is quite long but that's probably why i love it! rofl |
![]() ![]() ![]() this is sad, but I love the question mark in the title, but you seemed to miss the question mark after the first line |
![]() ![]() ![]() i dunno if i mentioned your creepy |
![]() ![]() ![]() i don't understand why i am so hooked to your poetry but maybe one reason is your variety that somehow always feels familer, it is quirky to discribe maybe its just cause' of your weird names |
![]() ![]() ![]() a long distance relationship you have had or something? |
![]() ![]() ![]() this is good |
![]() ![]() ![]() this is just creepy that must be why i love your stuff! |
![]() ![]() ![]() YES YES YEPITY YEP! this has to be a bunch of poems based around a story, it just all fits together so good. |
![]() ![]() ![]() maybe this could be another theme, maybe the person could have finaly tried to kill himself. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Maybe you could turn this one could be in a collection as well that is based around this poem, so please take some of these hints into what i would like to read, because i think that it could be very big, plus you could get some fun stories put together with poems out of these. Just think about it. (please) |
![]() ![]() ![]() YES I think that I sense another theme, maybe about trying to turn back time to change your life, and maybe not being able to fit in, even though everybody is different the main character finds him/herself even more different and then that person has flown over the edge and thinks about his experiences. Well, thats just what I have kind of picked up from the intro, man in grey, strangle, the unicorn one? and this one but thats just a wild guess i will have to keep reading. |
![]() ![]() ![]() another very intense poem lollol |
![]() ![]() ![]() um... yeah. This one seems like it might be a bigger story, I would love to see it expanded and not so confined into the one poem, maybe you could do another collection like Forbidden but longer and about this I would love to hear the story behind it. This one could maybe be a premise, i would like to see that. |