Reviews for The story of two daughters
Erlkoenigin chapter 1 . 5/7/2009
A beautiful story, very touching! I like the moon and sun- metaphor. I hope the sisters listen to the words of their mother!

Take care Franziska
Disturbed Insomniac chapter 1 . 4/30/2009
This story is nice... keep writing
FaithMemory chapter 1 . 4/25/2009
really touching. the story owns a great value, a great lesson for siblings out there! XD And the mother is great, the moon and the sun is completely different but they are beautiful in their own ways. Nice lesson.

Hmm, saw this really confusing line "The younger sister felt guilty to but she to could not control her emotions" I think the 'to' should be 'too'?

But anyways, a great story, awesome value! Keep writing! :)