|Reviews for Creation|
| Greenery chapter 1 . 4/25/2009
This is a very cute and amusing story. I love your faery's personality. Her indignation about the spelling was perfect. I like he super short, very curt and to the point message her boyfriend left her. I'd have so kicked his ass for that lol.
And the stereotypical story heroes! Heheh, awesome. I love to see that mocked.
This is a very interesting idea. I like how she resists fading into Before-the-Making and stars to create her new world. A little more detail would be nice, but it's pretty good as it is. Nice work. :]
| Link Broken chapter 1 . 4/25/2009
i like your main charactor. she's funny and easy to relate to.
i was a little lost in the transition scenes. like i knew she was going to twig, but i didn't know why. i liked how poetic and honest the ending was, but i wasn't sure what happened.