Reviews for Bran
Ernest Bloom chapter 1 . 5/11/2009
i'd even up the metric feet; e.g.:

If she offers a silver branch

And speaks to you of paradise

If she lures you from this green land

Consider heeding my advice

For she will cast her thread on you

And make a year to seem a day

Then seeking this fair land again

You’ll find you’ve tarried life away.
Isca chapter 1 . 4/25/2009
This is interesting, mainly because the only 'Bran' that I've heard of in Celtic Mythology is 'Bran the Blessed,' who is male, so obviously that can't be the 'she' in this poem. "For she will cast a thread on you." Is Bran a 'Fate,' then?