|Reviews for When Girls Cry|
| wo bu ai ni le chapter 1 . 1/1/2010
Oh harsh, take pleasure in girls' pain, why not
But i can see your point; the beauty in it xD
| Mirabella chapter 1 . 8/2/2009
:) Nicely done.
| Zapto369 X chapter 1 . 6/8/2009
Very good, I really like this one. The advice is perfect of course, and very relevant to love and comfort. Again, major props to you!
| FaithMemory chapter 1 . 6/7/2009
aw... this is so sweet.. XD very nice, seriously. When I cry, I don't like people who tell me to stop, really! XD Nice and true, i think. haha!
| Sercus Kaynine chapter 1 . 4/25/2009
Reviewing from the Review Game's Review Marathon! *link on profile*
I like the original take on this situation. It poses a good point.
The thing that bugged me is that this wasn't written in proper haiku format (5 syllables, 7 syllables, 5 syllables) because it wasn't a haiku and threw the flow of the poem off.
| Invalid Account chapter 1 . 4/25/2009
Nice poem, its rather quaint. My only problem with it is that it does not follow Haiku format, which is 5 syllables, 7 syllables, 5 syllables. The last line only has 6 syllables.
| kunoichi-socks chapter 1 . 4/25/2009
With the few words you used you managed to convey an image and the purpose of your writing. Nice job!