Reviews for Pancakes
PoetOfSaiMiHunManKal chapter 1 . 5/4/2016
The tone of this story was touching, heartwarming, yet nostalgic. Unlike your other stories (and your fanfiction) there doesn't appear to be any explicit elements of darkness/despair/tragedy here. However, there could still be an interpretation that it's buried within the text since this story is clearly a flashback/remembrance of the past. It reminds me a lot of my own memories of my past where things were much more simple and happiness came from more abstract sources.
Even in your lighthearted stories you continue to bring the heavy emotions out of the reader. This is why I enjoy your works so much.
Lily Thompson chapter 1 . 4/26/2009
I like this very much. It's short and sweet. It's a reminder of a simpler happier time. It's something that everyone either wants or wants to hold on to. :) Very well done.