Reviews for more than love |
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![]() ![]() ![]() This piece is beautifully written, and bittersweet, sad, but beautiful. well done |
![]() ![]() ![]() I enjoy the vivid imagery that you use in this piece, it's very tragic, almost bittersweet. Best of luck in writing, Bette |
![]() ![]() ![]() "Gunmetal pressed to sick sternums; how it felt to be alone together." You expressed the sickening feeling of 'getting caught' so well here. The gun imagery was brilliant. "Leave her broken like a hallelujah." PHENOMENAL. That reminded me of a song lyric: "It's a cold and it's a broken 'Hallelujah.'" |
![]() ![]() ![]() 'More than love' has a much different feel to it then your other works that I've read of late; it has a unique, hasty feel about it. Perhaps just the stucture of the verse, but I read it very fast. The images just thrusting themselves on me, much like the lovers encounter that you write about. I don't know if that was intentional on your part, but it really worked. Much love, Juliet. |