|Reviews for Pinch Me|
| heal me forever chapter 1 . 9/16/2012
ha dis is cool
| urtenshii chapter 1 . 11/6/2010
congratulation buddy, you just made one great story :)
the compliment was kinda random and it's not as if this is your first great story but hey, i love to give those type of compliment to awesome authors such as yourself...
okay, so i sound like i'm blabbering here but i think it might have been better if the story have been longer... you know, with all the cute twists and turns, but, hey, we don't call them one - shot if they got too long..
:) keep on writing, though, you sure are one great author
love the cuteness of the story !
| polkadotts chapter 1 . 5/30/2009
hahaha crazy woman this story was something...i liked what he said 'in your dreams' lol
| Lily Llynn chapter 1 . 5/7/2009
The pinching was kind of abruptly brought in at the end, so I didn't really like that, and this was super cliche, but it was cute and funny. I'm glad artistic dreamer added this to our c2. (:
| The Perfect Verse chapter 1 . 5/7/2009
I love how you can tell that Jake cares about Holly. Very cute.
| Kelly chapter 1 . 4/29/2009
THIS IS AWESOME! YOU ARE TOTALLY GOING TO GROW UP AND BE AN AUTHOR! THIS STUFF IS AMAZING! THE SHORT STORY IS SUPERR GOOD! I THINK THE BEST THING YOU'VE WRITTEN THUS FAR! AMAZING, WONDERFUL, SPECTACULAR, AND ALL OTHER WORDS THAT MEAN ABSOLUTELY TEN TIMES BETTER THAN ANYTHING I'VE EVER READ BEFOREE! I COULD PICTURE IT IN MY MIND THATS HOW DESCRIPTIVE IT WAS! AMAZING! AND IF I COULD MAKE THIS FONT BIGGER I WOULD!
| Novella Vialli chapter 1 . 4/28/2009
This was good!
| SIGMAkucur chapter 1 . 4/28/2009
is the whole idea come out from sentence 'pinch me?'
i like it xD
| kira chapter 1 . 4/28/2009
| x3life chapter 1 . 4/28/2009
aw this was so cute )
| FallonRae chapter 1 . 4/28/2009
Oh my! This is so good! You must make more! Are there more? You are an amazing writer!
| sarakate chapter 1 . 4/28/2009
this was so ridiculously cute.
im totally in love with it.
(sigh i wish this kinda story would happen in real life~)
| artistic dreamer chapter 1 . 4/28/2009
aw how cute! though it's a bit cliche and predictable, still really adorable nonetheless :D
| monkyy109 chapter 1 . 4/28/2009
that was cute ;]
| Supernova Light chapter 1 . 4/28/2009
Wow this is good. Really really good. Great details