Reviews for Flame of Rome
Violante chapter 1 . 7/13/2010
I will certainly join the community on lj, to read you wonderful stories
yaz chapter 1 . 7/6/2010
i rlly loved your stories from bf and im bout to join ph right now . i also fully support ph its so awesome how u guys took a stand.
Prenatal chapter 1 . 7/5/2010
hey myrika, i just wanna let you know i love all your stories on fictionpress and that its really a shame plagiarism has given you some much headache and trouble. anyway you're one of the best writers i'm come across in fictionpress and i would definitely support you if you ever publish a book. Keep up the good work! XD

PS: umm i've added you on livejournal under the username iaame611. Hope you can approve so that i can continue reading your work. D thanks a lot. peace out!
Searite chapter 2 . 6/29/2010
This is amazing! The whole premise is really intriguing. I can't believe it took me this long to read some of this story even though I heard how good it was.
EstrellaPedwar chapter 2 . 6/23/2010
That was AMAZING.

I loved it. I sincerely wish that those idiotic people hadn't plagiarized.

Not sure if you're still checking this. Oh well ._. I liked the idea behind the story, and I like Varro already.

Wish I could read the rest :/ I wish you the best of luck.
53BookTitles chapter 1 . 4/26/2010
I think it's great that you guys are all workign together - it's like a Writer's Guild :)

I am so happy you're posting your stories in other places too, instead of just deleting them, cause I'm going into withdrawal from not re-reading some of my fave stories :D

Thanks for the instructions!

Millie xx
Drmwrtr18 chapter 1 . 3/7/2010
I thought your story was a really creative idea and I hope to read more
WolfyGrace893 chapter 1 . 2/24/2010
Hey! I came upon this story some time ago and I was DEVASTATED to see it pulled down :( It's so sad and frustrating how plagiarists ruin everything for your honest and loyal readers :O But your decision is understandable :)

It just goes to show how lazy some people are (they can't even write their own stories - no sense of originality whatsoever). It's really, really upsetting. And I really love the plot of this story, too :) It's unique and probably the first of its kind that I have ever read here.
Kristina Suko chapter 2 . 12/3/2009
I have been meaning to read your works for quite a while now. I see your name everywhere on "favorite" lists. I'm so glad I finally had a chance to read, even though I know you've discontinued this here, and I need to apply to be part of Plagiarism Haven. (Thank goodness I haven't been targeted yet! I'm so sorry you were. That's the worst thing that could ever happen, and plagiarists should all die)

You have such a talent for making me (and obviously everyone else) want to read more. I honestly have not read many stories here that are able to draw me in, mostly out of my own distractability (not a word, oh well), and I came reading with a very highly critical mind. (which is normal for me, don't worry) But this is quite good! It met my expectations perfectly.

Entertaining, enchanting, and entrapping. And that's only the first chapter. :)

Warm regards,

Mara
Blondeprincesss chapter 2 . 11/8/2009
WOW .This is possibly the best 1st chapter ive ever read on FP. Im goin to sign up to LJ so i can read the rest.
Sunlight Rises chapter 2 . 11/5/2009
I really like this! Ecspecially the first line. The characters are really coming alive already.

That really sucks about the plagarism :/ I'm glad that didn't discourage you from writing though, because you definitely have talent!
Purple Glasses chapter 2 . 9/26/2009
Okay, I just want to say that this story is one of the reasons why I got an account. I LOVE THIS. I've read all of your other stories - before they were taken down - and I love your style. Your characters are all distinctive in how they are shaped, though still unique. I know that I'm pretty late in reviewing, but I just want to say that I would like to continue reading this story, and that I love your writing.
cana1004 chapter 2 . 8/10/2009
Wow.. I can't believe you have been forced to the point you had to take your stories away..(

People in this world are lazy and selfish and its a shame you have to put up with all that in such a personal way..

I read your Rome series and Black Sun stories on fanfiction last year... and your stories especially those of Rome have really affected me.. I am not usually a fan of fantasy especially about vampires etc but your writing has changed me!

I remember i spent about a week in front of the computer reading non-stop.. The way you write is not only captivating but unique and you are truly talented.. I'm sure you will be scouted and published soon!

I came back to read your other stories on fictionpress and to re-read your Rome series this year, to sadly find them gone..

I understand your reasons for taking them down..

but since i never got round to reviewing your stories last time i read them, i just wanted to leave u a note to say thank-you for sharing your amazing stories with the public..

Your characters will stay with me for a very long time to come.. )
Icyfire4w5 chapter 2 . 6/19/2009
Recently, I read somewhere that the Romans call their Emperors "Imperators". I think that I should read more about the Romans, since I know so little about them.

1) I love the introduction, man, it is amazingly frank. There is at least one vampire in ancient Rome, so I assume that the ordinary people are in danger.

2) I guess that the horse pulls the chariot, right? I am confused by "He rode a dark warhorse behind the chariot of gold." It sounds nice, but it confuses me nontheless.

3) I tend to hate male characters who are blessed with perfect looks. Since Varro is one of them, I will not be surprised if he murders Lia or something.

Even though I can only read one chapter out of so many, I am happy. This is an enjoyable chapter.
sophiesix chapter 5 . 6/15/2009
Oh you poor thing. That is so incredibly horrible, invasive, shattering.. its like they raped your work. Totally understand your decision. *hugs* hope all that horror doesn't affect you in your own work, even if it changes what we can see of you publicly. That you keep writing is more important that what your readers want anyway. I guess I can only hope you publish Rome within my lifetime so I can stop dreaming about it and read it! [Sigh. I love you Lia. And Varro. maybe one day we'll meet again ;)]
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