really ho0pe to see more on this one day

Very interesting. I'm definitely intrigued to see where you take it.

Ok this may be too superficial to ask but how can he receive such a huge damage while turning to a corner? Aren't you supposed to slow down when you make turns? Unless the other car was running on fast speed which I doubt since you don't place libraries on highways. And if the library was indeed along a road where cars can speed up and Noah was turning a corner, that means it should've been him to receive more damage. It means it should've been him who died.

Or is this part of the plot? :O

Will wait for the update.

Yes, I get how awkward he is, no need to ask.
Are you going to update anytime this leap quartet?

Well I would love to see how this goes...
If you ever decide to write it down, I sure will be following it !

I hope you come back to this and other stories that you've left unfinished for a while now. They have a lot of potential! I understand the difficulties in motivating yourself to write and the trials of writer's block! Urgh! But really, you're talented :D

I think you did manage to convey the awkwardness of the characters which is happily setting up the story for future chapters where stuff goes wrong for him and he gets confused and gets on very awkwardly.. I'm looking forward to it!

Good luck with your writing! D

"Woh."

-(This is a must read)

"I'm at a lost for words as this is just like me in everyway, with the feelings."

-Amazing.

Wow. That was a great start. I hope you carry on with this.

It's really interesting so far. 8D And yeah, it would definitely make an awesome TV show. (The shows nowadays are horrible, to say the least. ;;)

woah this is an awesome concept, it's sort of like a book i read once called air head, except they put her brain in a celebrities body blah blah yeah continue!

All your stories have fantastic ideas behind them and this one is no exception. You could say that this would be a very particular case of ugly duckling turning swan. Especially the insight into how our appearance relates to self confidence and thus reflects on other talents and skills sets us up for an intriguing read.

Moreover, I really love awkward, vulnerable but kind hearted characters so Noah hit the bull's eye for me. He is so... huggable.

I have a feeling that I would tremendously enjoy listening to his voice while he would narrate this story.

Finally, add to this UST, slash and (assumingly) sexy rival. Ugh, see what you do to me! Now my head is full of slashy fantasies concerning this story and there is nothing I can do about it! Ahhh, the everlasting frustration. It pains me to see this splendid idea being abandoned.

I hope that one day you will come back here and take it up again. Best wishes:)

Oh please update this story!

It sounds really good and I noticed that your other WIP (State of Unconsciousness) is gone?... Damn. I really loved that one too.

I'm enjoying this story and where it leads so I do hope you continue to write this. :):):)

wow this is a really good story. i would be happy to read much much more!

Good so far. I have enjoyed it. Please keep writing.

If you're still writing this story, I'd love to read more!

It's got a really interesting intro to the plot so far, and I'm curious as to what happens next!

P-poor Noah ;_; /cheers for him