|Reviews for Betrayal Within|
| hellopandaa chapter 1 . 4/29/2009
Hey, you really opened up your heart in this! That takes a lot to do. I hope whoever you wrote this to sees what you're worth and what they're missing out on.
This poem is very very good. The only tip I could give you is to follow your rhyme scheme all the way through if you're going to use one.