|Reviews for What A Mess|
| Black Sparrow chapter 1 . 5/1/2009
That was slightly confusing at the end, but it was probably just because I had a long day and am not understanding anything. :P
| Unique1952 chapter 1 . 4/30/2009
I really like the concept of this piece and how you were able to hold on to a constant rhymes scheme while telling this story. The only thing I would suffest is to add a few commas in some places, just to help the poem flow a little better.
Nice work with this.