|Reviews for Trigger|
| in theory chapter 1 . 4/30/2009
Trying to be constructive here, but this didn't inspire me to think about what you were saying. It seemed a bit obvious and depressive. Don't get me wrong I love disturbing poetry but I wasn't disturbed. Maybe everyone is just "used" to this kind of language now.
Positives: the flow was quite punchy and easy, quite dramatic too, if you "said" things in a slightly less obvious way.
Hope you're not offended, and don't take this as gospel, just trying to be honest.