That is good!...please continue: !

Question: Why is a Xenomorph, a terror from space that has wiped out civilizations, Scared of a little girl?

Well that wasn't scary at all. I'm being sarcastic in case your wondering.

wow. if you are free someday you could try to expand on this. i like the idea of a semi-metal yet living monster. like wolverine. but scarier. haha. the girl gives off a really scary intimidating vibe.

Very interesting start! I love your writing style, it draws you in and keeps you entranced.

Cant wait to read more.

*Dawn*