Reviews for Don't Drink The Coolaid
lala1234142 chapter 37 . 1/1/2011
LOVE LOVE LOVE YOUR STORY! "Nancy" is Very funny. though, I wish she could be more sympathetic towards others instead of a complete *itch until the last moment. Truthfully, I kinda wanted her to go with Leo but I think she is scared because they both share a traumatic experience and he will ind out her secret. Granted, I realize you have not updated in months but, Pretty please will you update?
Love Frog chapter 37 . 9/28/2009
I think Drew and Jack should end up together. I totally agree with her about Leo. Awesome story. Now I'm dying of anticipation, so please submit the next chapter soon!
Love Frog chapter 1 . 9/4/2009
Thia is an awesome story. I like how the main character thinks.
Just Me Here chapter 1 . 9/1/2009
wow. luv it! -maggie

bloody good show! -Mollie
Shimpleton chapter 1 . 8/19/2009
If this is a work of complete fiction you're genius. If you really are a disgruntled teenager who's exhauted from the tedium of life, but still the story is fictitious then it still rings true as a work of genius. If it's all actually true then you're a nut!

I like it! Would definitely read an entire book written like such, good job.

"Word out" or "Peace"... or maybe even "Groovy" dude.

Rock On.
PersonofthePen chapter 3 . 8/18/2009
Comparing Mom to Satan? That wouldn't work in my house (thank God she can't hear my thoughts)
PersonofthePen chapter 1 . 8/18/2009
That killed me about scaring that guy in front of you (I would so do that!) Ooh, there's more. Expect another review in a few minutes:)
sarcasticism chapter 27 . 8/15/2009
sorry i'm taking my time with these, for a loser i've been surprisingly busy. i'll try to keep writing as fast as humanly possible
The Last Maroon chapter 19 . 5/27/2009
Sorry I didn't review every chapter, but I read these 19 all the way through before doing this. I felt I had to review the 1st one and now I'll give a general review of the story...so far it's an interesting read. The plot isn't really that captivating but Natalie's an amazing character. There are a few characters (Leo, Hair-Potter-Hair etc) in the story that I'm not sure about (as far as what there significance is), but I'm willing to read to find out. Also what's going on these last two chapters is she bugging or is this guy/face real? Either way Keep writing, I'm enjoying this.
The Last Maroon chapter 1 . 5/27/2009
Great introduction to the character. I love her personality, she's very quirky even borderline rude, but it's hilarious so it works. Nice opening chapter
05-16-93-ashley-gamer-12-03-10 chapter 17 . 5/25/2009
oh man, this is getting so good! please update as soon as possible
05-16-93-ashley-gamer-12-03-10 chapter 12 . 5/20/2009
I love this story and I like how she nicknames people Pies-R-Us is an awesome nickname, i laughed at it
caitlinleah chapter 1 . 5/9/2009
You are a genius.
gasser47 chapter 6 . 5/4/2009
lol sounds just like me
gentleduck chapter 1 . 5/3/2009
The sarcasm is really overwhelming. It was okay at the beginning of the story, but it really started getting on my nerves as the story progressed.

Show, don't tell.

Also, this story is turning out to just be a rant disguised as a story, which is not good if you intend on becoming a serious writer. You've shown us what type of person the protagonist is, show us why she's like that.
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