Reviews for A Play
LostInMe chapter 1 . 5/26/2009
Ooh...I like that last line - unexpected, and it adds something (though I can't describe what) to the poem!
fleur de l'est chapter 1 . 5/1/2009
Lovely poem, the last line takes the cake. The liveliness of the first 2 lines makes the last line especially sad.