|Reviews for pinwheel|
| Isca chapter 1 . 12/30/2009
"Dear friend." I like the heartfelt tone of this opening line.
"The tattered pinwheel." Brilliant description.
"So be beautiful. Be glorious." A profound ending. :)
| Little girl Big world chapter 1 . 8/6/2009
Great imagery. I like the idea of this poem.
"with your heart
upon your sleeve,
crossed out in black.
time doesn’t heal,
but you could forget." -These lines were spectacular! :)
| young and the reckless chapter 1 . 5/16/2009
ah, this poem is glorious.
"let the colors blur/let the lines fade"
that is so fantastic :)
| Alice Blake LeFevre chapter 1 . 5/1/2009
I like the descriptive -ness. It paints a good picture.
| The-Golden-Hour chapter 1 . 5/1/2009
i realy like this :D
| Irish Lover chapter 1 . 5/1/2009
nice imagery i liked it alot. the fact you comapared a person and a pinwheel was very creative. keep writing ;)
| black.magic89 chapter 1 . 5/1/2009
This is beautiful (sorry that wasn't more original:P) Everything about it was amazing, it flowed wonderfully, the imagery was absolutely astounding, and the message was brilliant. Bravo!