Reviews for pinwheel
Isca chapter 1 . 12/30/2009
"Dear friend." I like the heartfelt tone of this opening line.

"The tattered pinwheel." Brilliant description.

"So be beautiful. Be glorious." A profound ending. :)
Little girl Big world chapter 1 . 8/6/2009
Great imagery. I like the idea of this poem.

"with your heart

upon your sleeve,

crossed out in black.

time doesn’t heal,

but you could forget." -These lines were spectacular! :)
young and the reckless chapter 1 . 5/16/2009
ah, this poem is glorious.

"let the colors blur/let the lines fade"

that is so fantastic :)
Alice Blake LeFevre chapter 1 . 5/1/2009
I like the descriptive -ness. It paints a good picture.
The-Golden-Hour chapter 1 . 5/1/2009
i realy like this :D
Irish Lover chapter 1 . 5/1/2009
nice imagery i liked it alot. the fact you comapared a person and a pinwheel was very creative. keep writing ;)
black.magic89 chapter 1 . 5/1/2009
This is beautiful (sorry that wasn't more original:P) Everything about it was amazing, it flowed wonderfully, the imagery was absolutely astounding, and the message was brilliant. Bravo!