Reviews for Dinner's Ready
P. S. Giovanni chapter 1 . 5/1/2009
Interesting. I can relate.
Electricityscape chapter 1 . 5/1/2009

you... this... I...


I loved this.

It is just great, I loved how I could relate to some parts, y'know?

sometimes it makes you connect better with the poem,

Wonderful. It is so well written.


Amazing, for sure.
wolfen princess chapter 1 . 5/1/2009
At first i was a little confused as to why the dialouge was there, but after thinking about it I believe it definetly fits the poem. It's almost sad (the poem) and it makes you feel for the girl, who is happy despite her trouble in finding her key.

I don't think the ending makes sense though,

Maybe all I want is someone to

Call my bluff

Does she want someone to realize she isn't as happy as she acts? Does she think someone seeing through her bluff will free her? Or maybe she want's the real her, the lonely, dark, her to be present instead of this smiling fake one? I'm not really sure how to take it...

But it is a beautiful poem and well worth the time I spent thinking over it...

~Wolfen Princess