Reviews for Loneliness
LostInMe chapter 1 . 5/3/2009
This is good! The rhythm is lovely, the descriptions original. My favorite stanza is the third - very nicely worded. I love the way you refer to blood as red/crimson tears.
Isca chapter 1 . 5/1/2009
"I can show what's here inside: a monster." This line is so striking and sad-allowing the reader to gain access to the very depths of the speaker's inner-turmoil.

"For to feel love is to feel pain." This emotional-binary does seem to enjoy each other's company, unfortunately.

"I put a bullet in my head." Devastating!

I loved the ending-death is freedom? Thought-provoking!

-Isca
lymli chapter 1 . 5/1/2009
this reminds me when one has nothing to do in weekend, great poem.
SilentVoices chapter 1 . 5/1/2009
I liked this very much, it was concise and to the point. The only thing that I did not really like was the wording of 'from out my vein/from out my eyes'.
MasqueradeAngel chapter 1 . 5/1/2009
Wow...that was very intense. It made you feel so many things at once, which is hard to do. So congrates! really enjoyed this if you didnt already guess that...)

MasqueradeAngel