|Reviews for Bloodied Metal|
| 403 Forbidden chapter 1 . 8/20/2009
The comparison of blood and metal repeated really makes this poem stick, and the rhymes you used are really original and add a lot to the poem. I like wording of this poem because it seems like it was written a great deal of time before it actually was. Fantastic work.
| Isca chapter 1 . 5/2/2009
"Blood tastes like metal." There is something metallic about it, you're right.
"And sleep on burning ash." STUNNING LINE! :D :D :D
"Death, a lonely herald." Nice personification. I also liked that the speaker suggests that Death is but a messenger.
"The flower's lively petal, now lays trampled in the mud." Great imagery! Nice life/death metaphor! Strong ending!