|Reviews for Beloved|
| irule505 chapter 1 . 7/28/2009
dude...that was sad...but also uplifting at the end. I guess this is why it's a good idea to treat each day like your last, or your family's last... :)
| axL-daZe1000 chapter 1 . 5/7/2009
Simply beautiful narrating. You have captured human emotions about grief, irony, and sadness perfectly in this story that I could almost 'feel' Haydn's pain about losing his mother. Hopefully, you got an "A" for this in your creative writing class.
Keep up writing.
| Sakura Reyna chapter 1 . 5/2/2009
The first paragraph hooked me in. It's like a moment of silence. It seems like all math teachers are out to get us! I like Hadyn's name. It sounds mysterious. Please keep writing; a son coping without his mother is intriguing! I put you on my alert list!
| JerryOnigiri chapter 1 . 5/1/2009
So far this is really sad but I'm intrigued.