Reviews for the darkest night, the brightest morning
Isca chapter 1 . 5/2/2009
"Hands bundled up like pot roasts." This simile is absolutely gut-wrenching. 'Pot roasts' just soaks the reader in animalistic brutality.

"She wonders if she still has hair." Oh, the tone of this is phenomenal, and heart-breaking. The speaker's looking for her dignity.

A powerful, emotional story,

-Isca
Faithless Juliet chapter 1 . 5/1/2009
This is deeply fascinating. The beginning is very lyrical, and you have several strong verses. The second half has much more of a narration-type style to it, more storytelling aspects.

The actual story aspect of this is so strong, harsh, and brutal, and I liked the way that you ended it. Very nice piece. Keep up the good work.

Much love,

Juliet.