Reviews for This Isn't Suicide
somersaultkick chapter 1 . 12/27/2015
I'm also glad it wasn't suicide.
Shadowed and Shattered chapter 1 . 5/2/2009
That was so cute, and I'm glad it wasn't suicide too. And your names kick ass. And Felix is so NOT a girl's name.
Dave500 chapter 1 . 5/2/2009
details, what does the blond look like? What is she waering. for drama don't do this. "ohmygod. ohmygod." instead do this. She exclaimed with deep conernd "Oh my god! Oh my god!"

Not only should you use the proper grammar but also spell out exactly how they are saying it. Here's a good example.

He was about to jump, she grabbed his left arm in a frenzy saying with anguish "Don't!"

That is the kind of stuff people like.

Finally you have a hard time holding my attention with this peice, this is a concept that could be used to form a peice that people would love to read, you just don't it. Why? detail.

mighty lu bu