Reviews for What if?
notfortheintelligent chapter 1 . 5/2/2009
Reading your profile and then this, I can't help but become curious of the subject matter. Regardless, its a beautiful piece, elegant in its simplicity. I would capitalize the lines, it would make the words appear more attractive (that sounds slightly retarded, but try it and see. Lovely x
SilentVoices chapter 1 . 5/2/2009
I liked the formatting - no capitals - it added to the intensity of the poem.