I read this story when I was 15 and it holds such a soft spot in my heart I’m always revisiting it :) time for my annual reread

What the-
Wait thats why you made the werewolf like an actual wolf
A werewolf is already a hybrid
Half human half wolf
This does not make sense at all, a werewolf is not a wolf..
If it can communicate like a human that mean it has a human brain and that means it would be fully sentient
Suddenly it's an actual wolf..
It's called were for a reason..
What?

But..you do realise..it's not just wolf
It's half human and half wolf..
And humans have instincts to but we can repress them because we've got this thing called the advanced human mind
So don't give us some crap about your interpretation and what you believe a wolf should..
You clearly can't be that stupid to actually mistake a werewolf's psychology to be more inclined to their wolf side..the human brain is too advanced for that, wouldn't allow it..
You just wanted to write a story with this type of character, be honest

Really loved the story. Though, Molly could be a bit annoying when she doesn't accept things but it makes sense why. Thank you for sharing the story with us here on Fictionpress :)

omg I knew it

HER REAL FATHER IS A WEREWOLF.

You're mind is interesting.. Keep writing more

bloody hell...

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Great story. Great ending. I love that you made it seem like there was no more hope but in the end it just *sigh* just perfect. I will definitely read your series but only when it's all completed and edited. Keep on doing what you do, your work is excellent despite some minor grammar mistakes. Awsome job!

Molly always doing something SO FUCKING Stupid. Ughhhhh she's really starting to be annoying never thinking shit through.

Molly is being annoying now like get over the shock your a wolf it's been months your not dreaming . You've killed a bunch of animals already accept it and move on from there so you can be able to deal with your change

Ok so Ried is dangerous smhh stranger danger that's why Molly should of never played bball with him

Ok I take the stuff back about Molly being dumb and going with a stranger since he didn't cause her to be unconscious in the woods

Molly being dumb she's blowing mine . How you drop out of college your last year when u have like 1 month to go & how you just talk to strangers all willy nilly telling them your first and last and leaving the people you suppose to be watching to play basketball it's obvious that he's dangerous that's why Ophelia was growling pay attention