Reviews for Esperanza
Guest chapter 2 . 6/11
Lovely work, glad I found it. Great, the way you slowly tell his past without it being too much all at once, how you keep giving him cues to remember. I love your attention for detail, too, and your description of nature and dire times. Feels very real.
-thank you!
Maylie chapter 22 . 1/3
Great story !
yaaramlm chapter 22 . 6/13/2017
This story, lord. Beautifully written, exciting, original, sexy... Perfection. I hope I'll get to read more from you, I've already read 'The Violet and the Tom' and thought it was incredible. Please keep writing! I know it's been a while, but you are so talented.
Fionaalex chapter 22 . 5/9/2015
Great story, thanks!
somequirkymusings chapter 22 . 3/7/2015
I am in love with all of your stories *cries happily* coyo and Tesla are so immensely adorable.
morningstorm70 chapter 22 . 6/8/2014
Another great story
Rae chapter 22 . 10/20/2013
Oh my gosh that was hot.
I could have killed you when I realised you killed off Estrella so Coyo would have nothing tying him to Esperanza as well as to bond them closer, but lets face it if your readers didn't want to reach out and strangle you from being so involved in the story you wrote then you'd be doing something wrong.
I remember reading your comment after the chapter with the first Coyo/Tesla masturbation scene and just wanted to say: you were worried about it being abrupt and a bit jerky, like seperate movements that have been connected together and it was but it worked. It definitely adds to the story rather than detracts from it - makes the perspective much closer to Tesla's since events can feel like that when you're disoriented and confused.
Crepes chapter 22 . 6/23/2013
You are so talented. I can't believe I finished it. The pacing was expertly done! I didn't feel like the story was going too slow or too fast, but just how it should be. Thank you so so so so so much!
divalcious chapter 3 . 5/25/2013
Bastante means a lot or more than enough. Basta means that's enough. I think that might be the word u meant.
Kaylin chapter 14 . 4/21/2013
I don't normally review partway through a story, but I just had to on this chapter. One particular bit just sounded like something I've always thought, but never heard anyone else say: Tesla's thoughts about love and hate. Thank you for that, even if you don't believe it yourself.
TheWitch'sLover chapter 22 . 1/4/2013
Awesome story, thanks for the read :)
TheWitch'sLover chapter 13 . 1/4/2013
Good chapter! Well-written with some interesting twists - I loved it! x
TheWitch'sLover chapter 5 . 1/4/2013
Just discovered this - really good so far x
R. Ficst chapter 22 . 10/16/2012
I definitely enjoyed the story very much. Nice work.
No name chapter 22 . 10/14/2012
I was thoroughly entertained
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