|Reviews for A Birthday in May|
| Dani P chapter 1 . 5/13/2009
love this piece 'cause i can relate. growing up is quite scary. ill be hitting eighteen soon and im terrifed/excited. love the part about neverland and "the boy who tries to pin a diamond on my finger"
| Neon Scribe chapter 1 . 5/3/2009
Wow, this is great! I love the I-don't-want-to-grow-up attitude; you captured it perfectly! The repitition of "green, green, green" and "never, never, never" was a nice touch. (:
| Disabled Account sdf chapter 1 . 5/3/2009
Nice piece of work!
Is it really that complicated turning eighteen? :-)