Aw, cute, haha!

I love when authors put really old works up on this site. They're always so cute and innocent, and of course shows some major improvements in the author's work.

Nice rhyme in this. I don't think many third graders could get a rhyme scheme that smoothly.

Nice piece. It made me smile :)

~Sparkles from the Review Marathon (link in profile)

haha, that last line took me by surprise. that's good i like it.

aaw! loved it! even though there's a dramatic change between this and your current poems, you still keep a consistant meter, even when you were a kid! that's awsum :)

at first i was like, "what the crap? this isn't like her at all." but then i read your A/N and i was like "aw!" i wish i had kept some of my poetry i wrote when i was a little kid. but i'd probably look back on it now and laugh at how stupid i was. i used to be terrible at writing poetry.

. . . actually, i still kinda am. *sigh*

Aww, haha! See, even in third grade you were a poet! I like this, and it's actually pretty creative for a little kid.

PS- You changed your name! I like this one a lot. :D