|Reviews for Set in Motion|
| owlvisions chapter 5 . 11/13/2009
Hey. So sorry to hear that your story was copied. I just wanted to let you know that my friends labybobcat54 and fennfire are raising a boycott of Fanfiction and Fictionpress. I know that you are not on this site anymore, but can you tell your fellow writers about this? And to anybody that is reading this review, please join us and take a stand against plagiarism.
| KiraLove chapter 5 . 6/5/2009
If I wanted to quit my fictionpress and join you guys up with my story would it be ok?
| pretitiful chapter 5 . 6/3/2009
omg! this sucks big time! i loved this story.
but i understand. and srsly, the best authors on fp are being plagiarised.
this must fucken on the bright side, im going to get livejournal because that's how much i love ur stories!
if i see anyone plagiarising ur story, i'll be sure to let yu know !
| akinaxxx chapter 5 . 6/3/2009
Sigh... and I was hoping for a update on Set in Motion. I really liked this, after all. Also, I completely agree with you. I really hope all the best for you because your stories are amazing. I hope you would someday publish your stories so everybody in the world can read it because I really think they deserve to be known. The stories I've read by you and Myrika have been one of the very best I've read and I'm really glad I've gone to read them. I even lost interest in reading books after fictionpress! Anyways, I really wish that I read all of your stories. I was also planning to reread Don't Make A Scene but oh well, at least I read it. I pity every single person who has never read any of your stories. You are a great author and I hope that you would be respectively recognized for that.
All the Best, Akina.
| Sputnik Kid chapter 4 . 5/31/2009
Do continue this. (:
| owlvisions chapter 4 . 5/30/2009
Intense chapter! Even more intense...Amaris has an uber cool ability that totally rocks and adds mystery to this! Rawsome chapter!
| owlvisions chapter 3 . 5/30/2009
Oh no its a cliffhanger! Must read more!
| Past of the Night Dreamer chapter 1 . 5/29/2009
Yay! My second sci-fi on FP! And my third sci-fi in general! lol! I'm very picky when it comes to sci-fi. lol. Seizing Sky popped my sci-fi cherry though. Nevertheless, I'm excited! X3
I've been meaning to check out one of your stories for awhile now. I've had you bookmarked since forever. lol! XXD
This was a cool . . . prologue? or chapter 1 or whichever! XD Oh, an assassin! Always fun. XD Your intro was interesting and Ivy sounds cool so far. It's going to be fun to see her develope as well as the plot. ;p
| D. L. Cross chapter 4 . 5/27/2009
Great story but I feel as if I can't connect to it, but it's looking good so far. I like the setting a lot, a dystopian society like Brave New World.
Out of curiosity, what inspired you to write something like this?
| Alexis.L.Covington chapter 4 . 5/26/2009
Children are scary creatures!
Great story so far but then again, I'm biased.
I love everything you write.
Also, I'm loving the little girl's name.
| Sarahj259 chapter 4 . 5/26/2009
Creepy little girl...
| serendipity90 chapter 4 . 5/25/2009
omg! no wonder people want amaris dead, with that kind of talent shes a walking target!
can't wait to read more and thankyou for doing such an excellent job with the chapter!
| hedwigisnotdead chapter 4 . 5/25/2009
ohmigoodness that child is SCARY.
also it is so awesome that you didn't let her just black out after the gunshot - a real killer definitely wouldn't let that stop her, and there are so many stories out there that repeatedly tell you that the character is ridiculously adept at weapons and assassination etcetc, but they always seem to get into trouble.
great story so far, update soon. :)
| 76cm chapter 4 . 5/25/2009
O. M. G.
THIS IS SO COOL! AMARIS IS SOME EVIL-POWERED KILLING CHILD!
| pretitiful chapter 4 . 5/25/2009
dude. i loved this chapter! heck. i love this story! omg. this story makes me go "wooah."
haha. i love the cliffies. and i so did not expect the ending.
seriously, i think yu write great and yu write in a style that captures my attention straightway.