Reviews for Free Fall
MakeSarahSmile chapter 1 . 5/13/2009
"As I tumble towards the concrete Earth/The wind sweeps cross my skin"

"People jumped off the edge/Because the fall is worth the collision"

These lines were breathtaking
FaithMemory chapter 1 . 5/3/2009
wow. very adventurous, well written I think cause I imagined every thing in my head very clearly. very nice :)