|Reviews for Free Fall|
| MakeSarahSmile chapter 1 . 5/13/2009
"As I tumble towards the concrete Earth/The wind sweeps cross my skin"
"People jumped off the edge/Because the fall is worth the collision"
These lines were breathtaking
| FaithMemory chapter 1 . 5/3/2009
wow. very adventurous, well written I think cause I imagined every thing in my head very clearly. very nice :)