Reviews for Confessions to a Drool Stained Pillow |
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![]() ![]() ![]() D'aw. I absolutely loved how she wasn't feigning sleep. There is a sense of reality, a dash of cliche and come on now, who doesn't love immature boys? The writing was clean, lucid and enjoyable. Kudos to you! |
![]() ![]() (Call Me Betty) I might really utterly and completely adore reading your story. I really liked the fact that it the protagonist was anonymous, but I wasn't so fond the swearwords/cussing. I felt like the character, Carla, could be fleshed out a bit more. I'm looking forward to reading your next piece of work. |
![]() ![]() I usually don't review, but the little review format at the end of your story was so cute haha. I liked the way this was written, and the character voice. Now I will go read something else you wrote so good job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hay, I love reading your story. I really liked, his sence of humour, but I wasn't so fond of the cliffhanger (he didn't really tell her he loved her, what happens next!). I look forward to your next piece of work. name your gold fish Lossie |
![]() ![]() Hey I really liked your |
![]() ![]() ![]() Dumb boy. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This would be an epic long story! I'm a sucker for the best friend cliché! But as it is I'm just going to have to use my imagination and pretend that after a few bumps in the road Carla realises she loves him too and it all ends happily ever after :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really liked reading this story. It was really cute, but I wish you kept going with it instead of just ending it like you did. Nicely done! |
![]() ![]() Haha.. i liked the way you defied the cliche of the person pretending to be asleep all along. The ending is good but kinda makes me wanna have an epilogue! |
![]() ![]() ![]() The note at the end had me laughing ] As for the story, I kind of sort of may have loved it. Cute, but definitely sad ( |
![]() ![]() ![]() so carla want in love with him? aww thats sad. i liked the way that carla was so human and he still found her hot! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was really cute. (: The characters make me smile. It's sort of sad that he can't tell her, but I like to think that he'll get to it someday. Good job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sexy. :). |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey, I enjoyred reading your story. I really liked Carla and , but I wasn't so fond of the teddy bear. :p I felt like the character of the teddy bear was ominously (whatever that means) portrayed. I'm looking forward to your next piece of work. |
![]() ![]() ![]() very good one-shot. : I love the guy! He's hesitant yet cocky in a way! Haha! He needs to get a life. :) Anyway, this is really good. lol! what's with the firstborn pet goldfish? : |