Reviews for Thanks you deserve
Moondog Dozier chapter 1 . 5/24/2009
This has a specific and universal message. We tend to learn from everything good or bad, as long as our perspective comes from the right place. Excellent audibility.
SuperSlurpee chapter 1 . 5/7/2009
I dig your rhyming in this. It's awesome! At the end of the poem though, when you're talking about God, make sure that if the "him"s are talking about God then to capitalize them. But if not, then... nevermind. Ha. I really like this poem, it's very... truthful about relationships when they're over. Very passionate! Keep up the awesome writing!
Black Sparrow chapter 1 . 5/5/2009
That's a sweet way to end something sad. I loved it.
Utah Dynamo chapter 1 . 5/4/2009
that's a good poem keep writing i'll read more