true story? wow, what happened after that?!

I love this story! Great job! :D :D

Ooooooh love it. Especially the "No, please don't. You can hold my hand forever, James, really." XDD Awesome everywhere. Love it! (sorry, repeating myself)

So cute. I would absolutely die if I embarrassed myself as much as Katy did. What was up with James? If he liked her why didn't he stand up for her when the popular girl was making fun if her?

OMG this is based on a true story? damn. if only the time I almost drowned I was saved by a hunky guy and not my older brother.

Holy crap I had frickin butterflies in my stomach the entire time! I loved it! Please finish it I am begging you! *gets down on knees and clasps hands, giving best puppy dog look* I am dying to finish this story, but then I realized that I can't because there is only one chapter! Haha anyways I'm being too demanding... again... well I guess that' just me. But, it's not exactly my fault, I wouldn't be so demanding if you didn't write such amazing stories! I need to find out what happens! I hope you haven't stopped writing or anything! This is too good to leave off! As are all your other stories! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE finish it! PLEASE!

That was a fun read! But why does he like her if she's never talked to him...or am I a bad reader that idiotically missed something (because honestly, I seem to do that a lot)] But anyway, I enjoyed that very much!

Very, very cute! I loved now I'm all smiley. And if that's a true story, even cuter!

LOVED it!

I think it was a really good (and funny) idea and the story was well written too. :)

woah, woah, woah, based on a true story? You can't say that and then not elaborate!

Cute story, too short. Seemed like James fell too fast.

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this was so cute.

And I can't swim either. Oh well.

AWW! REALLY? It's based on a true story? Any chance you caught the swimming part on video? JUST KIDDING. AHAHA! That was hilarious. I'd kill for a James Reed. That's a lucky gal. :D

Oh, so cute.

and different too, expecially how she jumped off the diving board. LOL

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I do like the boy and like that he's nice and caring and all - but honestly, why does he like her? I mean it's very random that he just decides to pick her and all. Especially since she tends to act like a brat. I do like the story though. I am just a little bemused at the how and the whys :P

The interaction between Katy and Elliot made me cracked up so hard. and i'm still laughing. HAHA.

such a cute story :D.