Reviews for When In Doubt, Play Dead |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Hmm he didn't look like he liked her.. But oh well, loved the ending! :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aw.. That's so cute!) It made me smile!) Well done! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was so cute and well written. Katy kind of reminds me of myself with the awkwardness and unmanageable hair. That's kind of why I stay out of water as much as possible. But, I digress. It was really well written, too. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really enjoyed this story! I love the idea of swimming lessons and having an attractive guy save your life ;) I just felt like the relationship between Katy and James was kind of underdeveloped. Katy said that he rarely talked to her, so it seems like they don't know each other that well. But I guess he's harbored a secret attraction to her? I'm probably missing something. Good job, though! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hilarious! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was pretty hilarious and cute. And it was based on a true story? What actually happened? |
![]() ![]() ![]() *snicker* Classic, this one. :) Great job. |
![]() ![]() ![]() omg. so sweet. |
![]() ![]() ![]() True story? Haha (no, sorry, it's not funny when someone nearly dies), I liked the story though |
![]() ![]() ![]() Cuteness to the core! I like it. I will definitely check out your other stories as well. |
![]() ![]() ![]() that was soo cute ;] i cant swim either so its ohkay ;] lols were was the dumbo teacher? lol. to bad popular girl didnt see that RAWR anyways that was super cute ;] and sweet |
![]() ![]() ![]() Based on true story? :D Who is it? |
![]() ![]() ![]() As a sucker for happy endings, I was immensely pleased by this story. Keep it up! |