Reviews for When In Doubt, Play Dead
Katie Valentine chapter 1 . 1/21/2010
Hmm he didn't look like he liked her.. But oh well, loved the ending! :D
ghurl00 chapter 1 . 1/21/2010
Aw.. That's so cute!) It made me smile!) Well done!
BethyT chapter 1 . 1/21/2010
This was so cute and well written. Katy kind of reminds me of myself with the awkwardness and unmanageable hair. That's kind of why I stay out of water as much as possible. But, I digress. It was really well written, too.
Beautiful Destination chapter 1 . 11/1/2009
I really enjoyed this story! I love the idea of swimming lessons and having an attractive guy save your life ;)

I just felt like the relationship between Katy and James was kind of underdeveloped. Katy said that he rarely talked to her, so it seems like they don't know each other that well. But I guess he's harbored a secret attraction to her? I'm probably missing something.

Good job, though! :)
SecretsUntold chapter 1 . 7/5/2009
funnechick chapter 1 . 5/16/2009
This was pretty hilarious and cute. And it was based on a true story? What actually happened?
Sabi2 chapter 1 . 5/6/2009
*snicker* Classic, this one. :) Great job.
Hazelnut Romance chapter 1 . 5/5/2009
omg. so sweet.
Jade Q. Dean chapter 1 . 5/5/2009
True story? Haha (no, sorry, it's not funny when someone nearly dies), I liked the story though
MiZZ SaHurr chapter 1 . 5/4/2009
Cuteness to the core! I like it. I will definitely check out your other stories as well.
monkyy109 chapter 1 . 5/4/2009
that was soo cute ;]

i cant swim either so its ohkay ;] lols

were was the dumbo teacher? lol. to bad popular girl didnt see that RAWR

anyways that was super cute ;] and sweet
P.F Ally chapter 1 . 5/4/2009
Based on true story? :D Who is it?
Amethystars chapter 1 . 5/4/2009
As a sucker for happy endings, I was immensely pleased by this story. Keep it up!
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