I like how you showed all the kids, hahah and Owen. I never thought anyone could forget to put pants on :).

Nice chap and the suspense at the end is nice, wonder what'll happen next.

Well alls well that ends well I suppose. And with that, I can't wait for the next book. Because this is a great book one and there has to be a book two. Write more soon! :D

It's just like Alazne to use such a dirty trick like the one she is using. Little cheat... I don't like her any more than I already did, which bear in mind was not at all almost. Great chapter by the way. :)

Wouldn't it be funny if Alazne's statue was put together wrong? Just a thought... Martin probably shouldn't let the kids do that, they might break it. :D

Great job on the chapter, and no worries on the wait.

I was cursed for reading this this blows water.

Why do I get the feeling that the thing possessing Alice is Alazne? I just get the feeling it's her. Crafty little woman isn't she? Wow. Exciting...yay. Nice job!

What, happened to Alice? Dun dun dun. Again, I couldn't resist but I felt the mood called for a bit of that. Eh heh...heh. Well, this was great like the other chapters and I am wondering what happened to Alice. Do write more soon...:)

Martin has a bud! Sorry, couldn't resist that. So this Tom is...an acquaintance of Martin huh? Well, at least he takes better to Alice and her friends than Martin sometimes does. Wow. Great chap!

Yeah, what IS this science you speak of? I don't know. Hah hah, that was perfect. It's true. If science had any place in this story, then the snow making wouldn't be possible like that. If science was in any Fantasy story, I don't think it would be Fantasy any more. So good with that. Also nice update, I like how Alice can be a bit mischevious and a trouble maker. Ahh...

Great chapter!

Ah...and stuff. I loved how you said stuff, in italics in the authors note. Just made it funny, like you were emphasizing the word stuff. Logan is a neat character and I like him the most now out of the six, I believe it is now. Great chapter and now that they are all in one place together, this can only get better. Write more soon please!

Wow. First it's rude, snotty boys and now it's suffocating water Alice and Logan have to deal with. Quite not wonderful isn't it? Jeez the girl can't catch a break. Wow. Well, I enjoyed this chapter like the others and I can't wait to read more!

Mwe he he! Wonderful chapter! I find this story to be intense, well described and full of interesting characters. Three things I love in writing. You're doing awesome and I loved this chapter, especially the ending scene! Write more soon please!

Logan is adorable, I'll say it now. So, so cute. I wonder...if Alazne will show up again and cause some more trouble like she is good at doing. Great chapter, and please write more soon!

Really good! I like Dabi, but why cant the water Xabiere swim?

Other than that i really hope nex one will come soon

Ultzi has been talking about Noah behind his back...that isn't very nice. And Dabi must be the sixth guardian-xabiere-thing...waa I can't think right now. Sorry...but this chapter was great and I have a feeling I know who the last Xabiere is and it is getting stronger! Write more soon please!