Reviews for Favoured One |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I'm reading this again after so long away ... and it still holds up. I remember this story in highschool how descriptive the language was, all the little gestures, Kaheem keeping Mahk's wine cup filled ... it's all really good and deserved to stay with me over a decade later. I'm not sure if you read these reviews anymore, and I'm sure your life is a lot different now than it was when you were writing this, but I'd love an ending. I'm sure we all would. |
![]() ![]() I don't know how many times I've read this story but I can't get 's well written and works the imagination over time,is there any chance that you will continue? |
![]() ![]() Absolutely exciting and wonderful! Too bad you shelved it. :( |
![]() ![]() Hello. I look forward to your next update. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Omg I loved this so much! The feelings and world could be felt throughout the entire story. I'm so sorry you never finished it. I would have loved to read the ending. I do hope you are still writing though. Talent like this must not go to waste Keep up the great work |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please please update, this story is awesam, will he find kaheem in time? |
![]() ![]() Pliz pliz pliz update,, this story iz too good |
![]() ![]() Pliz update soon, this is awesam |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is a very good story! Hoping for update! |
![]() ![]() I have only just discovered your stories... they are wonderful... this is by far the best and I sincerely hope that you find the time to finish it. Regardless, thank you for some great entertainment. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh my goodness! This story is so amazing I can't believe you just stopped! Is there in chance that you might ever continue it? It's so wonderful and I adore the characters and dynamics and background and I want to read the rest of it so badly! I love the way you write and it's so awful that this story wasn't completed. I love it! Please update one of these days! What a freaking cliffhanger. Goodness. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ahhhh! What a place to be left! I love this story and its characters. Please please please come back to it as soon as you can! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I am so loving this story, but am also berating myself for once again starting something unfinished. I do hope to see its eventual completion! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please update :) even just one chapter to round it off and I will love u forever ;) |
![]() ![]() ![]() and then what? |